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参考范文
A Rolling Stone Gathers No Moss
(⑴)Last week,a group ofus students,who are ready to leave the campus and face thereal world.talked about an issue:What kind ofjobs we should take,pair-time(onthe。side)extemporaneous lobs or stable fulltime jobs?Some think that the former best suithem because they Can get more experience by doing various kinds ofworks while othersmaintain that the latter render them more benefits.②l was on the side ofthe latter since Iam convinced that“A Rolling Stone Gathers No Moss.”
③In the first place,by sticking to one job,we can develop single-minded devotionand focus our attention。energy and resources on what we ale doin9.④Wal·Mart,thenumber one retailer in the world,is a good example.It might have a lot of chances tocash lnon other fields.such as financials and real estate investment.Instead of followingthe prevailing business trends,the management of Wal-Mart keeps devoting single.
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范文点评
①此处引用题目素
材,举出两种观
点,并点明人们
支持不同观点的
原因。
②此处作者表明自
己赞同后一种观
点,即我们应该
找一份稳定的全
职工作。
③iIlthe firstplace意为“第一,首先”,
表示叙述观点
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mindedly to what it is good at---retailinghas clearly in mind consumers’needs,servesthem whole.heartedly and has secured its leading position in the retail business.AndWal.Mart is among the few that have been lucidly spared by this global economic crisis.The case tells US how important single—minded devotion is in projecting a correctbusiness strategy.
⑤In the second place,we can acquire the skills needed toachieve professionalproficiency,if we put ourselves into it.Take my aunt Nancy for example.She is a jobhopper who has changed dozens ofjobs in the past few years and succeeded in none ofthem.However,my uncle Eric,a bank cashier in China Construction Bank,sticks tO oneiob and spares no efforts tO practice。his skills and finally achieves Success by being promoted tO an executive position recently.He has the greatest satisfaction and self-。fulfillment from his present job.He now strongly believes in the greater success in future:ifhe continues to do one job well at a time.
⑥Carnegie said,“Put all your eggs in。to one basket and--watch that basket.”This ishis。family creed.And his words are indeed thought-provoking and educational in thatthey really Carl help the growth of a good business,a.person and of coulse a nation.Indeed,a rolling stone never gathers moss.
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的顺序,在写
作中常见。
④此处以沃尔玛为
例,论述了一心
一意做一项工作
的重要性。
⑤此处作者举例对
比说明了找一份
稳定全职工作的
优点,即:可以
获得专业技能,
实现自我价值。
⑥文章结尾作者引
用了卡耐基的名
言,再一次强调
自己的观点。
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